Sunday, 1 August 2010

Magpie 25 Heart




Only the locksmith
knows the intricate workings
of the hidden heart








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18 comments:

Stafford Ray said...

First comment! We seemed to see this prompt much the same way, but you pipped me by two lines! Will have to lift my game mate! :-)

RA said...

Simple and beautiful. :)

little hat said...

Stafford: I was probably subliminally influenced by yours. Credit to you. I owe you one.

Catherine said...

Less is more. Nicely done!

Jennifer said...

Steve, you do know how to weave subtle layers into your lovely haikus.

annell said...

You said it all, in so few words! Thank you.

Helen said...

Lovely contribution ... looking at the clock on your blog ... 2:30am. Sweet dreaming ............

Felicitas said...

Simple yet thought-provoking. A lovely Magpie.

Sam Liu said...

Profound, moving and oh so true. Beautiful magpie :)

kathew said...

simply lovely

AngelMay said...

Nicely done Haiku. :)

willow said...

Ah, that dreamy locksmith!

Jingle said...

true,
lovely done!

signed...bkm said...

Lovely words...bkm

Tina said...

Nice haiku! Simple and elegant.

Krunal Palande said...

lovely haiku

Caty said...

beautiful and simple. nice haiku

Tumblewords: said...

very nice - succinct and true!