This is me, the writer, telling stories about family, travel, quirky moments in life and refecting on the world and its absurdities.
I see the dream, as clearly as if it were my own. The yellow hair glowing golden in mornings glorious sun.
Damn you love that Ange don't you! What a muse. You two little love birds you.
Beautifully worded. :)
Lovely piece, you can feel the warmth of the sun and the pillow..bkm
A beautiful and heartfelt Magpie haiku!
This is the most beautiful haiku I have ever read. (((sigh)))
Extraordinarily gorgeous imagery!
So lovely and beautifully realized!
Beautiful haiku, beautiful magpie.
wonderful image that fills my heart! this is certainly one of the most loving magpie i've read this week, my friend :)
Woww... so dreamy...and so delicately charming.. a picture of a golden dawn in my head already! a pillow creased with a dream! LOVELY magpie!
Lovely and a superior haiku. Most get their strenght from the angular rhythm, this ome flows. Who is Ange? :-)
Thanks for your comments everyone. Willow: you humble me with your commentStafford: GPBaaaa has blown the cover on my love life. Ange is my long suffering partner, mother of two, wife, companion of 35 years. Still not bored (she or i). Amazing.Sadly she doesn't read my blog so she is blissfully unaware of my adoring words and my addiction to her yellow hair.
What a lovely haiku. So much emotion in those carefully chosen words.
gentle and sweetloved this one
Steve - this is a gorgeous haiku. Be still my heart.
Tina; That's what i love about haiku. The choosing of the words where you try and capture soemthing special in the fewest possible words. Thanks for your comment.Jennifer; Thanks for your gorgeous comment. Funny how sometimes it just tumbles out right!
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