Friday, 20 August 2010

Magpie 28 Dribble


It may look
like
my
nose
is
dribbling


You may
think
that my
drop
lets
are
beyond
my
control

But
my
hand
writing
is fluid.
See.
I just
wrote
Willow
between
those
toes.

Although
it's
taken
me
a year
to
finish.

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16 comments:

Sarah said...

creative! I like your thinking.

Niamh said...

Nice Magpie! Like the drop/
lets! very surreal!

Jingle said...

I just write Willow with those toes....

what a magical line.
excellently done!

Helen said...

One of the best ~~~~ for sure!

Brigid said...

Lovely magpie, creative and a charm about it.

kathew said...

cleverly written-

Claudia said...

very creative - also the drip shape of your words…what are you going to write next year..smiles

my magpie is here

Brian Miller said...

so i see you write about as fast as i am on my book...loll a fun play on the prompt. nice magpie!

willow said...

So witty, and so observant! The photo ism indeed, one from last year. Love how you incorporated it into your piece. Magical Magpie!

Berowne said...

Novel approach -- good.

signed...bkm said...

Great take...bkm

Catherine said...

I was wondering if anyone would write something about Willow between the toes. Very good!

Vicki Lane said...

Very fine!

Tumblewords: said...

Clever and crafty!

kavisionz said...

Wow.. this was really creative!!
And the "Willow" written looks like a string curled masterfully to form a word..

I loved the way your mind worked on this one... Too good!

Lyn said...

There's no rush when you get results like this!