Wednesday, 6 October 2010

Mapie 34 Extinguished


through my darkest days
your light burned bright in my life
now the flame is dead


For more writing on this theme click on the Magpie stamp.

5 comments:

willow said...

Touching haiku, and so full of sadness. Well done, Steve.

Jennifer said...

...and knock me over with a baseball bat... that haiku took a fast turn and threw this reader for a loop! Good one!

kathew said...

so sad
so wonderfully written

Jingle said...

well said.

Jingle said...

The theme 4 our Monday poetry potluck this week is 7 sins…if you could write a poem related to our theme, link to our potluck, that’s would be a bliss to us, you could simply link in a random poem to share, the pleasure is all yours.
check out us at http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/,
our potluck is open Sunday 8pm to Wednesday, 8am.
Hope to see you in our team this week.