
I touched your hand
you smiled and turned your head
your eyes drove straight through me
moths circled the verandah light.
From the street we must have looked like lovers
from where I sat I was merely hoping
your skin glowed in the luminous light
heat poured in from the recently disappeared day
Inside the house your mother called your name
I knew you wanted more than conversation
you leant back on the ledge beside me
a car horn sounded in the street
You flicked your hair, I avoided your gaze
I see your shoes are blue
I hold my breath you turn and tilt your head
the fluorescent light flickers

14 comments:
I loved the emotion that you have captured from the image...
Both hesitant to do anything more than a conversation...
You have considered small details of the night so accurately...
Very well written...
Lovely take on the Magpie prompt. Well done ... captured the mood vey well.
A gentleman or perhaps uninterested.
Either way, I like this magpie.
I like the anticipation in this and also perhaps some trepidation..yet the emotion is under the skin..good.
"From the street we must have looked like lovers
from where I sat I was merely hoping"
Excellent.
Thanks for the "moment" Steve. It reminded me of another one...
Gorgeous
amazing composition.wow.
So Ma was behind the green door, eh? lol
Lovely anticipation!
Indelible images and mood - excellent.
Well captured!
Beautifully written ...
Hesitant yet erotic. Nice.
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