Wistful, dreamy, picture book homes exist.Slate roofed, cream brick, vine covered
set in large estates
with huge dogs loping across expansive lawns.
I know.
I've driven past them.
They sit in suburbs on hills with views of the city.
Highgate in London, Ascot in Brisbane, Potts Point in Sydney.
I'm not envious.
I'm just more aligned to other planets.
And other lives.
I drive through the poorer suburbs
and wonder at their lives.
I see small houses on small lots.
Fibro, corrugated iron, champerboard.
The yards are sometimes bare.
They're rentals or housing commission.
Some of them are unkempt
but many are proudly neat and loved.
There's an honesty about these suburbs.
A lack of pretension.
I grow to like that about them.
Aussie Rules

After a while I wander over towards them. They're sitting in the far corner of the activity space and they're playing a game on the TV. A Playstation game I guess. They are totally engrossed and calling to the screen as they compete against each other.
Now here they are in Australia. Their housing commission home is luxury. And here they are playing and feeling safe. I step a bit closer to see what game they're playing. I'm looking for a way in. I want to make contact. They're playing a ball game, but it's not their native game. It's not soccer. I hear one of them call to his player on the screen 'MARK!' It's a term I'm familiar with. I look more closely. My whole body bursts into a smile. An athletic figure wearing the colours of my favourite team, the Brisbane Lions, soars into the air to take a beautiful high catch. A mark. 'Do you like that game?' I ask. 'Yeah, its good' they say and turn back to the game to send their players scrambling for the ball. To take that mark and kick a long low drop punt towards the goals.
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A meaty poem. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteNice story...I love sports..I think they are so good for young people and older people too..I watch all of them...bkm
ReplyDeletesometimes sports is the way to get everyone on the same playing field, if you catch my drift.
ReplyDeleteexcellent observations!
in the end not so much different eh? kinda glad this ended well as too many imigrant stories do not...a nice magpie....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Excellent, thought provoking post, Steve.
ReplyDeleteI love the contrast you show in your poem. Excellent! Excellent tale about the Aussie football, too.
ReplyDeletewell done this story. I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteOther people's houses..love to peer into windows as I pass..a chandelier here..a moving figure there..all real lives..good poem..and the rest too...
ReplyDeleteI get more aligned to other planets too Steve. Maybe because there are certain stories there that make your whole body burst into a smile.
ReplyDeleteI loved this.
I'm glad you found a link - hopefully the first of many. It should be what this life is all about - links and similarities, not diferences and divisions...
ReplyDeletegreat poem, i really enjoyed reading the post too.
ReplyDelete... a lack of pretension. I like that too. Very nicely written!
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