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Sunday, 1 August 2010

Magpie 25 Heart




Only the locksmith
knows the intricate workings
of the hidden heart








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17 comments:

  1. First comment! We seemed to see this prompt much the same way, but you pipped me by two lines! Will have to lift my game mate! :-)

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  2. Simple and beautiful. :)

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  3. Stafford: I was probably subliminally influenced by yours. Credit to you. I owe you one.

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  4. Less is more. Nicely done!

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  5. Steve, you do know how to weave subtle layers into your lovely haikus.

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  6. You said it all, in so few words! Thank you.

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  7. Lovely contribution ... looking at the clock on your blog ... 2:30am. Sweet dreaming ............

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  8. Simple yet thought-provoking. A lovely Magpie.

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  9. Profound, moving and oh so true. Beautiful magpie :)

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  10. Nice haiku! Simple and elegant.

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  11. beautiful and simple. nice haiku

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  12. very nice - succinct and true!

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